Very fair was her face, and her long hair was like a river of gold. Slender and tall she was in her white robe girt with silver; but strong she seemed and stern as steel, a daughter of kings. Thus Aragorn for the first time in the full light of day beheld Éowyn, Lady of Rohan, and thought her fair, fair and cold, like a morning of pale spring that is not yet come to womanhood. And she now was suddenly aware of him: tall heir of kings, wise with many winters, greycloaked, hiding a power that yet she felt. For a moment still as stone she stood, then turning swiftly she was gone.
- "The King of the Golden Hall," The Two Towers
See, Tolkien? It doesn't take much to give us some romance. One beautiful paragraph sings it clear. And you even follow it up with two more moments in the same chapter: Éowyn's hand trembling as she brings Aragorn the wine cup, and her gaze moving to him while saying goodbye to Théoden before the men set off to Helm's Deep.
And this isn't even a couple that ends up together.
So if you wanted us to feel the Aragorn/Arwen bond, all you had to do was give us *one* such paragraph describing something similar between them, somewhere in all the pages of The Fellowship of the Ring. On basically every page you give one beautiful paragraph to the scenery or weaponry, or you recite several stanzas of a poem. So why merely a few murky enigmatic hints about Aragorn and Arwen's love, when it's got such emotional potential (a long-lived Elf giving up her immortality for the future King of Men!), and would only have taken a moment like the lovely one you just gave Éowyn? If you'd done so, maybe a lot more people would love Arwen, or at least like her half as much as they adore Éowyn. I, for one, would have appreciated it.
I know. I can't stop editing when I read nowadays. It's an affliction.
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Date: 2014-02-19 09:08 pm (UTC)(OK, only some of them "beg." Others demand.)
And now there's non-canonical Tauriel/Fili, so I guess Galadriel isn't the only one...
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Date: 2014-02-19 09:32 pm (UTC)HERB-MASTER sees FARAMIR gazing wistfully at ÉOWYN, who is looking pensively out a window and hasn’t noticed.
HERB-MASTER: If we had currency in Middle-Earth, I still wouldn’t offer a penny for your thoughts.
FARAMIR: Oh, wow, I so totally would.
HERB-MASTER: Offer a penny?
FARAMIR: No. [Blushes]. Do you know her?
HERB-MASTER: Éowyn of Rohan, brother of King Éomer, your kinswoman.
FARAMIR: My kinswoman?
HERB-MASTER: Not particularly close.
FARAMIR: Whew! Do you know if she’s, um…
HERB-MASTER: Why don’t you ask Merry?
FARAMIR: Who’s Mary?
HERB-MASTER: Not Mary, Merry. The short guy with the feet. They spend a lot of time together.
FARAMIR: (glumly) Oh. Are they, like…?
HERB-MASTER: Beats me. Ask your uncle.
FARAMIR: My uncle?
HERB-MASTER: Prince Imrahil of Dol Amroth. He brought them both in. Apparently the two of them took down the Witch-King.
FARAMIR: The Witch-King?
HERB-MASTER: Yes. The little guy stabbed the Witch-King in the knee, and then Éowyn chopped off his head, or that's how I heard it. Do you know that if you keep repeating the last two words someone says to you, you’ll sound like a dolt?
FARAMIR: A dolt?
HERB-MASTER: (Rolls eyes).
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Date: 2014-02-20 03:18 am (UTC)Sigh, Tauriel...I haven't seen the Hobbit films yet, and I admit the Tauriel bits in the trailer give me extra amounts of pause. Granted, the material needs more females, so...hrmf, yeah, okay.
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Date: 2014-02-20 03:31 am (UTC)Maybe the problem is that he's like 88. :D
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Date: 2014-02-20 05:41 am (UTC)I apologize to Faramir for taking liberties with his intellect…
FARAMIR: Wait, last time I was conscious, Theoden was King of Rohan. And isn't his heir named Theodred? What's all this about 'King Éomer'?
HERB-MASTER: While you slept great deeds have been done, and great and tragic….
FARAMIR: Whatever. Tell me what else you know about the blonde over there.
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Date: 2014-02-20 05:42 pm (UTC)As for inbreeding, eh, after Game of Thrones it's not so bad.
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